Mass Effect - Perfect Page 6

At loooong last! Here's page 6. The events here show just what happened when Shepard heard the screams for help!

Egad!! It looks like Miranda has much more in store for Ashley that just patching her up. Just what is she doing in the last panel!? Stay tuned for the next episode

Hehe, I REALLY like the last 3 panels. Hehe I took a week off from drawing, came back and every line fell perfectly into place! Now I enjoy being smothered into huge soft luscious love pillows as much as the next guy (or gal ), But that's just hot!

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It's NOT breast vore..... Absorption Vore...

I had to cancel the commission. There will NOT be anymore pages after this, sorry guys. The story we had planned was just too long for me to keep going. I have other projects I'd like to work on. So here's the story....

Mind you it only a rough draft and a basic outline of what was planned. Does not go into much detail, but that's where all of your imaginations can come into play. Feel free to take the idea and use it however you want in your own written stories, the owner and I do not care anymore Enjoy!

Okay, so the whole premise of the story was to have Miranda absorb all the main female characters of the game, including that DLC character, Kasumi Goto. And we were going have Morinth instead of Samara.

Ok, the Normandy is in space, It's light's out for the crew. Miranda is experiencing a nightmare, about her youth and growing up with her father. Just then something slices its way through the wall. A small explosion and the slice falls to the ground. Slinking out from the shadow crawls a mysterious probe. Swiftly covering distance as it makes it's way onto Miranda's bed. The Probe does a quick scan of Miranda, her dream taking a turn for the worse. Her vital signs elevating, her biotic power emitting abnormal signals. The Probe calculates the best injection point, and strikes, injecting an unknown concoction. Miranda wakes with the sudden sting, her temper surges and unleashes her biotic fury on the small probe, decimating it into thousands of small pieces. The sudden surge of her biotic power and the solution entering her body causes her biotic power to go hay-wire. She tenses, the nightmare fresh in her mind as she "short circuits". Suddenly she slumps down, hair in her face as she breaths deeply, her stare is dull and glazed, a small static band of energy flickering across her eyes. Her mind has been rewired. From the nightmare, her father's words, his plans, his intentions were now who she was. She wanted to be... no, she must be, needed to be "Perfect"

With the ship now on alert, Miranda has shaken off her stupor and meets with female Shephard and Mordin at the conference room, viewing details of how the probe got onboard. Upon reviewing the likely scenarios, Miranda eyes Shephard across the room. Slowly, her desire for Perfection slip in, her mind is still unable to cope with her altered state, she faints. Shephard rushing to keep her conscious just as she passes out. She's rushed to Med Bay and set on a diagnostic table as Dr. Chokwas and Mordin rush to keep her alive. Dr. Chokwas keeps her stable as Mordin runs a full body scan. Shephard waiting anxiously next to Miranda for any news. Mordin, being a genius, searches for a hunch, and finds it. A shape or symbol that could lead them to their first direction. EDI runs the symbol through the extranet data banks, finding the closest match belongs to the Borgia Company, EDI further discovering a secret research plant on Planet Erinle. Almost on queue, Miranda wakes up as soon as Erinle is spoken. Of course, of all the planets in the galaxy, it had to be Erinle. Still being secretive, she asks for Shephards help, not telling her just how significant the planet is. (Here is where we let the audience decide what Shephard will do, kinda like the game. After polling the readers, I wasn't too keen in allowing the readers having an input anymore ) After traveling the galaxy, they orbit the planet. Shephard, Miranda and Zaeed take a small shuttle to the surface where a battle is already in progress. They rush in, finding cover near a fellow soldier. Shephard asks for the situation, only to find out it's Ashley Williams. After brief banter, Ashley rushes off to take cover by the facility, Miranda watches Ashley go by, slipping into her desire, She needs HER. Using her sniper rifle, Ashley takes out as many security drones as possible. Without warning, a drone blasts a shot at Ashley, piercing through armor. Miranda immediately takes advantage of the situation, leaping at the opportunity to get Ashley alone. Shephard fend off enemy fire as Miranda drags Ashley off and out of sight. The team is distracted by a ear shrieking scream coming from Ashley, a battle droid launches a rocket at the team, Shephard dodges in time, but catches Zaeed off guard. Shepard looks back at a limp crispy body that was Zaeed, having to shove her sorrow aside, she rushes off to find a Miranda laying unconscious on the ground. **Moments Earlier** Miranda pulls a screaming Ashley far from the battle, and away from sight. Making sure the coast is clear, she uses her biotic might to rip Ashley's armor clear off her body, then tossing the shattered pieces far into the woods, leaving a disturbed, almost naked Ashley leaning against the wall clutching her wound. Miranda walks back to her, lowering herself down as she straddles Ashley's waist. Unbuttoning her top, he breasts flop out. Miranda grabs Ashley, holding her deep into her chest as Ashley struggles. (Here's things left off in the comic) Ashley's skin melds with Miranda's as she sinks into her chest. Miranda reaches down, clutching Ashley's ass as she pulls her deeper, the struggling inside her subsiding as Ashley's body melds with hers. Miranda struggles to keep silent, soft whimpers escaping past her lips as the last of Ms. Williams slides through her soft skin. Miranda collapses under the pleasure, barely able to re-fasten her top just as she passes out.

** The rest of the detail wasn't planned out but here's the general idea,We wanted it so that when Miranda absorbed a girl, she took on some of their knowledge, skills, and/or physical characteristics **

Shephard shakes Miranda awake, asks what happened. Miranda struggles to get up, makes up a story of how they got ambushed through the walls. So the team blast their way into the complex, down corridors, through giant security bots, heading to the main office facility. As the fight proceeds, Shephard notices Miranda suddenly develope a mastery for combat weapons and alliance military tactics. They blast through a big door into a giant office with sole figure sitting in the far end, he's the top facility director behind a large energy barrier. Nothing can penetrate it. After conversation of what's going on, revealing that Erinle is where Miranda came into existance, director tells the team where "Ashley is being held", Miranda tells Shephard to go without her, she has more questions that need answering. Shephard leaves and the barrier shuts off, Miranda asks about the chemicals injected into her. Director just tells her who commissioned the production, and Miranda's father appears through a secret wall door. The drug injected into Miranda were full of nanites that were built for mind control. Miranda's father says a phrase and she collapses on the ground, a biotic aura forming around her. Father sighs in relief, director gets smug as they both exchange words. Miranda breaks free, uses her full power to shove the director out the window, then draws her pistol and shoots him in mid air before he disappears. Sirens go off, Facility recognizes the director is dead, starts self destruct countdown. Miranda stands up, dull glazed eyes switch to father. Father gets slammed hard against the wall, slammed against ceiling, then slammed to the ground in front of Miranda. They exchange words, Miranda smirks as she straddles father's waist, exchange last words just as Miranda unfastens her top. After a few romping, moaning moments, Father is gone from the world. Miranda snaps back to reality with alarms going off, she sprints down the hall, contacting Shephard who's still looking for Ashley. Miranda yells there's no time, the facility is going to blow any minute. Shephard slams the wall, sheds a silent tear and sprints back through the hallway. They meet up in the corridor they started in, Shephard contacts the shuttle, it appears right at the exit, they jump in and the shuttle blasts off right at the facility goes nuclear. Shephard slams the hull of the shuttle, angry that the director "lied" to her, and gives a silent apology. Miranda consoles Shephard by saying she's in a better place Miranda doesn't go after Shephard here cuz Shephard is too strong for her.

The rest of the story is unplanned, basically Miranda is consumed with the idea of becoming perfect. She makes up another lead that trails to a different planet. There I would have Shephard be busy with some other activity, so Miranda leaves with another fire team. They would meat Liara at this planet. Somehow Miranda sabotages her team, either leaving someone behind to die, and/or absorbing the rest, including Liara. Shephard becomes very suspicious that her crew is disappearing when around Miranda, so she freezes all missions and all transportation to and from the ship, and have EDI monitor Miranda at all times. I also, somewhere in the story, I want Mordin to confront Shephard that he's been studying Miranda's charts, body language, etc and have him mention that he's noticed considerable abnormal biotic frequency as well as temporary brain wave pattern change, yet Miranda acts the same. Here we wanted Miranda to pretty much take over the ship. As to how she begins, we didn't work that out just yet, but we did want a chronological order of things. First, we wanted Miranda to absorb Kasumi Goto, reason being the commissioner wanted Miranda to use Kasumi's skills to sneak into Tali's quarters, and absorb her, taking on her engineering expertise. Using Kasumi's abilities, she sneaks into the AI mainframe and somehow "absorbs" EDI. As in somehow Miranda is able to over writes EDI, thus making her and the ship one. So when an image of EDI pops up, it's no longer EDI but a digital nude figure of Miranda (Kinda like Cortana from Halo) I thought it would be cool that when she absorbs Tali, she gets her glowing eyes, or when she absorbs Jack, she gets her tattoos all over her arms. One idea I really wanted to do was have Miranda get the same seductive powers when she absorbs Morinth. Somehow she get's Shephard back into the captain's quarters, seduce Shephard with those powers to where she almost has her. Then they're interrupted by Yeoman Chambers. There's a scuffle, things flying across the room, and Shephard get's away. She rounds the corner of her door frame, Chambers barely makes it before she's tugged back by impossibly strong biotic power, Shephard struggles to hold on to Kelly, but she's yanked back and the door slams shut. Shephard backs away to the elevator as she hears Kelly's violent shrilling screams for help suddenly go silent. Then have a shot of Miranda leaning back on the bed, Ms. Chambers' head finally disappear under Miranda's heavy breasts. Then toss in a joke,like having Miranda say, " Mmmmm, guess I'm a virgin again."

Ultimately Miranda clears out the entire ship of the crew. Whether she absorbs them or kills them off, all that's left is Shephard and a glowing, nude, very voluptuous, deity like Miranda floating around the ship. Maybe have Shephard make one last ditch effort to blow the ship up, and Miranda taunting her the entire way. But in the very end, Miranda becomes ... perfect. Again, we never planned this part out so how ever she absorbs Shephard is up to you. Personally, I envision the end as Miranda stops Shephard just seconds before Shephard flips the switch. Shephard is stiff, unable to move as she's levitated off the deck into the air. Spun around, and slowly pulled toward a floating Miranda. She smiles smugly, softly saying she's perfect now, there's nothing Shephard can offer her, not anymore. But she places her hand softly on Shephard's cheek, drawing her closer. Shephard, the legendary hero known throughout the galaxy, is now pressed against the most powerful woman in the galaxy. Miranda must have her, collect her. And so she does. Shephard's uniform tears away like ash in a breeze. Miranda and Shephard's face just an inch apart. Miranda softly smiles, her eyes turning pitch black. Embrace Eternity. Taking her time, Shephard slowly, slowly sinks into Miranda's perfect frame. At the very end, Miranda has a large round dome on her belly . The galaxy's greatest hero now rests, curled inside the galaxy's most perfect being till the end of time.